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A visit to the Doctor



This story was  inspired by the pic LiveNKicking that was done by: Kisiro A.K.A Vorefan

  Hope you like it. J


Anna had done it. She had eaten her  boyfriend. It had taken a while but the doctor told her it was okay. Anna  decided to go to the hospital to see her doctor and show her what she had done.  Getting into her car proved to be a challenge. Her Stomach stuck out away from  her lithe 19-year-old body like she was over due with triplets. Finding a shirt  that fit her was a big problem. Luckily she had an XXL nightshirt handy. It  covered most of her belly. Pants were no problem. Her hips had not gotten any  bigger. Yet, Anna could feel her BF moving around inside of her. It was making  her have to pee. She had better hurry to the hospital. "Anna, let me out. I  can't believe you ate me. I know you said you would if I cheated on you but I  only slept with her once." She would hear from her stomach occasionally.          




  Anna walked into the Hospital and  asked to see Dr. Vorcadia. The receptionist's eyes got real big as she saw how  big Anna was. "Right away Ma'am, just have a seat she will be with you  shortly." Anna went and sat down in one of the plastic chairs. She was the only  one in the waiting area, which was odd, normally there were one or two people  waiting to see Dr. Vorcadia. The receptionist told Anna to go back and see the  doctor now in room 3.



  Anna had a hard time getting to her  feet. Her BF had shut up at least. Other then an occasional snore all was  quite. Anna Carefully walked down the hall to room 3. As she opened the door  she could see Dr. Vorcadia swallowing someone. Her stomach was already  distended It looked like someone was already in her! Anna knocked on the door.  Dr. Vorcadia took one last swallow and waved her in. Anna watched as the  doctor's neck and chest returned to their normal size. "Wow doc, I did not know  you ate people too." Anna said. "Of course I do girl, although I only eat  unruly patients." Dr. Vorcadia replied. "Well looks as though you finally got  the nerve to eat the cheater. Good, here lay down on the table and we will take  a look at him through the ultrasound. Anna looked at the table. It was too  high. There was no way she would be able to get herself up there! Dr. Vorcadia  pushed a button on the side of the table and it slowly began to lower.



  After it was low enough Anna laid  down on it. Dr. Vorcadia pulled up her T-shirt uncovering her large belly and  started rubbing a gel all over it. Anna could barely see what the doctor was  doing over her massive tummy. Anna heard the ultrasound machine start up, and  felt Dr. Vorcadia start rubbing the wand around on her tummy.  "Yep he is still  alive and kicking." Said Dr. Vorcadia,
"Don't I know it." Replied Anna. "I would like to keep you over night for observation. Besides our toilets can  handle what you are going to need to do tomorrow. And I have some patients  coming in. Maybe you can give me a hand with them?" Anna looked at the monitor.  She liked the feeling of being full. She wanted to be so full she couldn't  move. Anna looked at the doctor and said, "Yes".

The end?


Maybe I will write a follow up for this. Maybe not. We shall  see.

  Who knows what The Watcher knows?

©2007-2010 =zewhatcher
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This story contains vore... If you don;t like vore... Don't read the story....

Edit: I tried to clean this one up for easier reading as well.

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:iconanakin13:
Again, a little short for my tastes, and it ends on a cliffhanger, but the detail was good. Oh, and BTW, 1st!!

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Sometimes fate smiles upon you. Sometimes, she just throws her head back, hocks a big loogie in your face and runs away, laughing and pointing as you try to get the spit out of your eyes.
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Thanks. Yeah this one was a bit short, however tis one of my early stories and therefore is allowed.

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I am the one who has seen the unseen, one who has lived for a time beyond measuring. Only I have seen and remember the rise and fall of empires, I am the one who is undying and is denied the breath of heaven and the damnation of hell.

I am Zewhatcher
:iconanakin13:
Ah, yeah. My earliest story was a Star Wars fanfic. Too much EU content. Make it stop! I still see visions of characters not in the movies! Jacen Solo!? AHHHH! *goes in the corner and cowers in the fetal position.* Needless to say, i never finished it.

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Sometimes fate smiles upon you. Sometimes, she just throws her head back, hocks a big loogie in your face and runs away, laughing and pointing as you try to get the spit out of your eyes.
:iconzewhatcher:
Which is why I steer away from fan fics most of the time... mainly because if I am to write one, I want it to be as close to hwo the actual characters would act.

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I am the one who has seen the unseen, one who has lived for a time beyond measuring. Only I have seen and remember the rise and fall of empires, I am the one who is undying and is denied the breath of heaven and the damnation of hell.

I am Zewhatcher
:iconanakin13:
Yeah, i know what you mean. You don't want, for example, Darth Vader saying something like: "okay, go look at dantooine for the rebel base." I mean, you want a fanfic to be at least somewhat believable.

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Sometimes fate smiles upon you. Sometimes, she just throws her head back, hocks a big loogie in your face and runs away, laughing and pointing as you try to get the spit out of your eyes.
:iconzewhatcher:
Exactly. Which is why I will be watching Yu-gi-oh a lot in the coming weeks... I have someone who commissioned me to write a fan fic on the series, so I have to watch some relevant episodes.

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I am the one who has seen the unseen, one who has lived for a time beyond measuring. Only I have seen and remember the rise and fall of empires, I am the one who is undying and is denied the breath of heaven and the damnation of hell.

I am Zewhatcher
:iconanakin13:
Well, i guess there are worse things you could write a fanfic about. Good luck!

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Sometimes fate smiles upon you. Sometimes, she just throws her head back, hocks a big loogie in your face and runs away, laughing and pointing as you try to get the spit out of your eyes.
:iconzewhatcher:
Thanks. ^^ I am gonna need it I think.

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I am the one who has seen the unseen, one who has lived for a time beyond measuring. Only I have seen and remember the rise and fall of empires, I am the one who is undying and is denied the breath of heaven and the damnation of hell.

I am Zewhatcher
:iconanakin13:
You're welcome! ^_^

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Sometimes fate smiles upon you. Sometimes, she just throws her head back, hocks a big loogie in your face and runs away, laughing and pointing as you try to get the spit out of your eyes.

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